Nicole Lynn

Will someone please tell me who Pat Buchanan is!

Jay- Z once said that there are 2 types of music: good and bad. I like a little bit of everything...that includes country, rap, and oldies. Though without a doubt ...

Chapter 2 France May 12, 1602 2: 22 am The darkness could not conceal the screams of a woman in labor. 12 hours and counting; no one knew how much ...

Right off the bat the first thing I noticed was the spacing of the paragraphs. Reading on the computer screen for a lot of people is difficult, so double spacing ...

Well done! This is very intriguing which means you must continue it, of course. I have a few suggestions, as I always do- after that’s we’re all here for isn’t ...

The first thing I picked up while reading this was that she/ he seemed to be in a trance. Like she/ he was being drawn towards the church, so the ...

This was really great. I liked it a lot. There are only a few things I will suggest. One being, separate the paragraphs for a lot of people- including me- ...

This moved fast. There are a few things I would like to point about the story that don’t necessarily fit with the actual world. In the real world students do ...

This was good! When you’re talking about being thrown aside is it the queen that has thrown you away? I can’t really comment on anything else because I don’t think ...

Chapter 1 New York City December 18 12: 45 am I was numb to the cold. It was below freezing and I felt absolutely normal, but then again I couldn't ...

Emily seems to be deeply disturbed. I love the description of the boy, and the way you described the feeling that’s in her. Also the first part made it seem ...

This starts off good, but towards the end it goes a little rampant. It first gets a little confusing when she looks for the boy. “It was almost a call, ...

The underlining is to show how the sestina works. There is a certain order the words have to go in.

I wrote this in Creative Writing, it is formatted in a form called Sestina. It’s simple, but challenging. Each stanza is 6 lines, and the last word of each line ...

I liked this- it was very sweet and tender. It really flowed nicely, and was very imaginative. There isn’t really anything for me to critique… at least in my opinion. ...